Second Row80 Check-in w/ DIVE excerpt!

It’s Wednesday, which means it’s time for my second #Row80 check-in! So far I’m totally digging this blog hop–I’ve been very productive, and it’s nice to have a community of people to battle alongside!

So. To business. Since my last check-in, I’ve written 2,349 words of DIVE–that’s 849 more words than my goal! WOOT! I’m going to keep on keeping on, but here’s a quick excerpt from what I wrote this week. (UPDATE: this is a revised version, using the comments below, but please feel free to give me more feedback!)

Something warm tickles my side. I scramble away from where I am resting, but my skin continues to pulse with heat. I feel around, trying to find the source, until my fingers trace along a bump at my hip.  I slip my hand into the waist of my harakeke and pull out the stone I found in the lagoon. I had almost forgotten it was there—it feels as if I found it years ago, though it was only yesterday.

The grey stone sits heavy in my palm, and though it is a little warm, I cannot account for how hot it felt only a moment ago.  I rub my thumb along the thin crack that runs up the center of the stone.  I don’t know why I’ve kept it—surely the shimmer I saw in the lagoon was a trick of the light, just as the heat at my side was nothing more than a daydream.

And yet…I put it back into my pocket.

If you have any suggestions as to how I might improve the prose, let me know in the comments. This part is important, so I want it to really shine. 🙂
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